Brimbank Park.......Rondeau
Brimbank Park Brimbank Park has shades of green With hills and trees to perfect the scene I remembered how we met that time And from it grew a love so fine I passed today where we had been A love grew...
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This is so beautiful..yet I read sadness..for what could have been..perhaps still wanted..I love your style enjoyed reading this very much..would like to read more..
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Hello Teagen I've not explored this form, but loved the shift in emotions through each verse, so softly and gently formed, a voice with the ache of the situation so perfectly captured. Loved this so...
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They are still in love, but no longer meet alone. Thank you for your comments DK
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Its a great form Max, but like any other you have to select what you want. My favourite Poem in this form is In Flanders Field. I don't know if you can back track to my forum and my Selected Poetry.
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Teagen-- "Flanders Field" is a real good choice. Your poem was a treat to travel through. thanks, andy
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my favorite form Teagan, and you do it so well...Now scared to post mine ...eek! love it Sammie
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Thanks Andy. I posted, In Flanders Field by John McCrae MD in my Selected Poetry back in 2002. Here's the link if anyone's interested: http://www.thepoetsgarret.com/2002/020429.html Don't be scared...
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Thanks Teagan, I will hop on over shortly to read again. I was just over there a bit ago actually and my computer locked up so I rebooted. best, andy
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Boohoohoo !! such a beautiful place for a sad ending ! but a beautiful poem too, mr. Gardener !
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Brimbank Park is a great place and good for inspiration as long as you have Mossie repellent with you. Thanks darl.
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~ this is one form I have yet to try (one of many) you do it well, dear one...you make it looks so easy this poem is so very enjoyable...and that closing is haunting...great capture *hugs* Sash xx
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Touching depths in this Rondeau, dear poet!! I enjoyed how you colored your font green as well! Nice touch!
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